Rough cut and evaluation

Rough cut

Evaluation

So far I believe that the footage we have gathered and edited up to this point is very good! I like the shots that I have at the moment as I feel it doesn't give away too much about the story but it does give the viewer a hook which will make them want to see more. I also like the range of editing I have added with shot length, transitions as well as filters over certain shots (e.g. plying with the contrast for the show shot!).

However, in order to improve this I will need to finish off the editing that I have done so far and ensure that the shots that I have gathered are in a suitable order to make the opening sequence interesting, appealing to the viewer and make sure that the footage stays an opening sequence and not an opening chapter as well as guaranteeing that the genre it is-is maintained. this may mean I might have to record some more shots, change around the shot order and add different filters and transitions for the final piece of footage for my thriller opening

All in all I feel happy with what I've done so far and feel that my work as potential to go far!